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"Be Free"
I'm not exactly sure where the verse divisions are, but there's some parallelism either between the first two verses or within the first verse.I said you'd be free, didn't I?
I said you'd climb high, didn't I?
Took you out to the sky
Told you one day you'd fly
You didn't believe me, did you then?There's "didn't I" in the first verse (or first half of the first verse) and "did you then" in the second verse (or second half of the first). There's the same verb with different subjects ending the first two lines of each verse (or each section).
You didn't look up, did you then?
Didn't look to the sky
Didn't believe you'd fly
Didn't believe you'd fly
"Dance in the Smoke"
The second and fourth lines of the verse (which is just repeated over and over again) are identical save for one word:We will light a giant, burning fire tonightbut those two different words alliterate with each other, so it's not a difference that sticks out that much.
We will build it and dance in the smoke
Every branch we'll tie somebody's worry to it
We will burn it and dance in the smoke